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Set this house on fire, watch it glow in the blaze.
Humans we are all liars, and none of us can ever change.

Got my things in order, packed up my yellow suitcase.
Baby I can still remember, the day you said maybe we need a break.

And the look on your face well it's hard to say
cuz you wouldn't even turn it my way,
i guess the ceiling was just more appealing.
And the ceiling fan, kept on spinning
like it was some other planet in there.
And I was crushed, under the gravity of reality
and it was just to much to bare.

So I got my things in order, packed up my yellow suitcase.
Baby I can still remember, the day you said maybe we need a break.

Well I am blooming eventually
but the winter it is fickle.
I can feel the fear coming down in a trickle,
down my spine, down my soul
through the seams of my birthday suit.
I'm coursing through the sinking shape
that's sleeping next to you.
I am just the dust that's just fallen off your skin,
I am but the hopeful thought that maybe things will end.
I am merely but clearly mother nature's own drug
that she sent down just to test your love,
just to mess you up, just to temp your flesh.
It doesn't matter anyways I always second guess
my self-worth, my self-doubt, myself all around.
I am nothing more than the bones beneath the ground,
the ash beneath the dirt, the rock beneath the ash.
And maybe we can be together when all this world has passed,
and these bodies mean nothing, and these hearts they stop beating.
And we can finally stop saying and actually start feeling.
And believing in what the poets said, maybe then the living
will be wishing they were dead.
But baby until then,

I'll get my things in order, packed up my yellow suitcase.
Baby I can still remember, the day you said maybe we need a break.

And it was so cold the way you pushed yourself away from me.
Slept in your bed everynight, swear I could not feel your heat.
Lying awake watching your face and I've been crying,
'cuz I know the only thing in which I have faith is
the fact, the fact, the fact of Change.
'cuz people, we dont' change, but things never stay the same.

So I'll get my things in order, packed up my yellow suitcase.
Baby I can still remember, the day you said maybe we need a break.


Set this house on fire, watch our hearts glow in the blaze.
Humans we are all liars, and none of us can ever change.
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Author's Comments

This song is a lot different from all of the other ones I've written. namely because it's got a bit of a hip-hop style to it. i've got a video of it up on youtube, check it!!

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:iconvampirebutterflymel:
Sounds great in the video! Your rhymes are so effortless. <3

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Girlscout gone wild!!!:strip:
:iconlovespoon:
HMMM...whooo I loved your hair and top in this.

Ahem aside from that.... :)

The rap part worked well, long rap part.
The intro and refrain worked.

You left out a stanza after the long rap part. :giggle:


The third stanza you sing the first two lines rap style, but lapse back into your original rhythm. If I am correct, I think The entire third stanza should be rap.

Other than that cool song.

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:iconzbird:
ive listened to this song far too much now, i love it so much. love every word you've strung together.

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:iconkitkatgurl007:
finally!
haha i've been looking everywhere for the lyrics to this song.
my friend saw you live and got one of your cds, then showed me, and im in love.

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